Conscience Fiction
Poetry by Ilva Pieterse

Another woman

March 15th 2011 in Poetry, Writing

There is another woman living
In the friction
Between your hips and my thighs

Do you think I haven’t seen
The memory of her
Swimming in the moisture of your eyes?

Do you think I haven’t noticed
The sadness
In the lines around your smile?

Do you think I haven’t realised
You’re somewhere else all the while?

Do you think I haven’t measured
The distance between
What you say and what you mean?

You’re not the first to show up here
With a broken dream
Slung over your shoulder
Heavy with things you never told her

How you’re wishing you could hold her
As we’re lying on my bed
I can hear her broken promises
Resounding in your head

I’m tired of being a consolation prize
I’m tired of soothing away silent cries
I’m tired of picking up the pieces
And wasting all my kisses
Wondering why no one misses
….me.

Should I just accept the fact
That she’ll probably want you back
Once she remembers all the things
That are making me fall in love with you?


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“Another woman”
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Theresa

When I read this I thought, I know that feel, bro.
But the one I fell in love with was just another hoe.

While he was traveling, he said I was the one he missed.
That failed to soften the blow of knowing there was another girl he had kissed.

I doubt I was ever the one for him, or him the one for me.
But sometimes I still picture what him and I could be.
If he hadn’t been missing some other girl, and had truly been missing me.


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Jess

I started crying when I got to the second stanza.
When I first started dating my current boyfriend, his ex had only broken up with him about a month and a half before and I was so scared that she would start missing him before he was over her.
I mean, things are fine now. But the memory still hurts.


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Ilva Pieterse

I am glad things are fine for you, Jess. Treasure the love and don’t let the memory hurt you too much. And if does, write about it – that always helps for me :)


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jatinder

very vivid !!! nice…..:)




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